Tuesday, September 29, 2015

I believe in music



I believe in music

Javier Espinoza
09-28-2015
English 3-4


Well to begin ,with music is my shield against negative comments, and people who are trying to bring me down because when i listen to my music i forget about the negative things within my days basically, I'm in "MY personal space". When I'm in "MY personal space" i convert those negative thoughts within my brain so i think "today was a good day "or feel better during my day . Basically when I'm sad, feeling bad, or going through tough times, i think about everything that i did in my day and think if i did the right decisions or not. "MY personal space" is a way to claim myself down or a place for me to about something or someone and how I get there is by music because it my personal sector.

When i have an emotion sometimes i can relate to the artist and what he or she felt when they wrote the song . The reason i say this music is my shield is because it's like protecting my emotions and feelings from other people who are trying to bring me down. Music has made my happy in times I should been reactive about things but I was proactive when I heard happy music . I think the tone of the song shows the way you feel at a moment or an emotion you have about something or someone.

When my sister passed away this year all i had was music that shared the same emotion , i had when my sister passed away . Music always helps me out when I'm sad ,depressed or lonely because this year will be tough to get through for me. I will have live with the pain within this year and hope I'll make me stronger. Will I think that artist is trying make you feel better about yourself and have self-confidence within yourself.

I need to stop listening to negative comments, hatred and people who are trying to bring me down and make me suffer , I will start listening to the positive comments/songs in my life . I need to put a stop on negative comments in life so then I should be listening to happy songs instead of negative tone songs . Will when I listen to happier song I feel about but when someone make a rude comment about me or life it makes my reactive. When I'm reactive I go really negative in my day and feel bad about myself .

I want my life to go from negative to positive because I'm fed up with negative comments and people that bring me down in my life . That's why I'm going to use my shield less and become stronger , faster, better and most of all be tougher because most of the songs I hear always have those words I have said . Like the artist say we need to have self- confidence inside us . Artists can make us relate to themselves and write about that emotion.

That's why I believe in music.



5 comments:

  1. I like the emotional atmosphere you added to your post but you have a significant amount of grammatical errors.

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  3. There are some grammar errors but, he uses personal experiences to describe how music can change someone and this makes the reader understand better.

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  4. Sorry about your sister, then again I didn't even know her. What you show us that music is more than something than we thought, unfortunately there are some grammar errors that sometime interfere of what you're saying (or writing to be precise.)

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  5. I love how you use your personal experiences and describe with details how music helps you with your struggles in life. I also like your story because I can relate to it.

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